The quality of the collage in the background and the camera was too low and when printed they looked blurry and pixelated so I had to replace them with better quality images. For the collage I recreated it using the same images of flowers that I had used in the collage that were the ones I had taken myself and I arranged these in a collage. I dont think doing it like this took away from the collage effect and I think having it better quality makes the poster look more proffessional. I couldnt improve the quality of the image of the camera because of the deadline so I found another image that was a much better quality and photoshopped the white background and used this instead. I think the camera stands out better now it is better quality and it gives a better overall finish to the poster.
I also tried out a few different colours with a green and some sepia style colours but I think the blue still worked best over all because it is soft enough to allow the images to still stand out but I think it also helps the poster to stand out more than if a brown shade was used and I think it works better than the green as it is softer and the poster with the blue had a more aged and vintage feel to it.
I made the type bigger for the date to make it stand out more and to catch the eye better so it doesnt just blend in with the picture.
I then added the location on to the camera. I also tried adding it in to the title as shown below but decided to keep it on the camera because I think it makes the overall layout of the poster look neater and more in proportion like this.
This is the location added on the title. I didnt choose this layout in the end because to do this I had to move the main images down and I think this makes the poster look bottom heavy and it also takes up more of the blue space making it look more cluttered and I think having the single line titles give it a better layout and readability.
This is my final outcome for the poster. I am happy with how it turned out because I think the black white and blue contrasts help it to stand out and catch the eye, I think it meets the vintage theme because of the typography, colours and the textured layer and I think it meets the brief because it helps advertise the festival as it gives across the theme and style of festival and will catch peoples eyes.